Thursday, November 11, 2010

another one

Opening(Memory) Battlefield soldiers are fighting and screaming Switch to a woman in armor on a horse.  She is in front of a group of men who are not in the fight, she has her hand up in the air and is holding the men steady.  She throws down her hand and the men charge forward yelling.
Natalie Charge! Kicks the sides of her horse and goes galloping forward.  She pulls out a sword and starts to cut down enemy after enemy
Switch to a man on the other side of the battle who is just watching the fight.  A man on horseback rides up to him
Soldier Lord Malfoy, she has entered the fight.
Malfoy Where. He scans the battle looking for the woman
Soldier To the right, Sir. Points toward the woman
Malfoy Quickly moves his head so he can see her Ahh. You Turns back to the soldier who brought him the information take six of your best men and retrieve her for me.
Soldier Sir questionly six?  But she is only one woman.
Malfoy grabs the man by the throat I will not underestimate her.  You

one more of my dream storys


  • Characters


  • 13 Elders


  • Amazonia


  • Antony


  • Helen


  • Athena


  • Iris


  • Apollo


  • Jace


  • Duran


  • Myra


  • Helena


  • Narcissus


  • Hera


  • Pierce


  • Jonathan


  • Kalika


  • Marcus


  • Lysander


  • Perceus


  • Sophie (Reed)


  • Selena


  • Aura


  • Selene


  • Reece


  • Sonja


  • Lucy


  • Sophia




  • OPENING THE THREE SISTERS; AMAZONIA, HELEN AND IRIS; ARE IN THE BACK OF A DEPARTMENT STORE LOOKING AT JACKETS AND TALKING QUIETLY

    AMAZONIA WHISPERING AND GLANCING AROUND TO MAKE SURE NO ONE IS THERE  WHERE DO YOU THINK THE ELDERS WILL SEND US NEXT? I HOPE IT’S SOMEPLACE PRETTY.  PICKS OUT A BLACK LEATHER JACKET AND TRIES IT ON.

    HELEN LOOKING AT HER NAILS. SHE IS SITTING ON A STOOL.  I REALLY DON’T CARE AS LONG AS I GET TO KILL SOMEONE IN A MONA TONE VOICE

    AMAZONIA YA, I GUESS. LOOKS AT HERSELF IN THE MIRROR HOW DOES THIS ONE LOOK?

    IRIS THAT ONE LOOKS THE BEST SO FAR. TURNS TO HELEN HELEN HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT YOU LIKE TO KILL.

    HELEN STANDS UP TO LOOK IRIS IN THE EYE BECAUSE IT IS WHO WE ARE HER VOICE RAISES AND IT IS WHO WE WERE BORN AND TRAINED TO BE.

    IRIS HER VOICE RAISES I ONLY KILL BECAUSE I KNOW THAT IF WE DON’T KILL THEM THEY WILL KILL US.

    AMAZONIA SITS DOWN ON THE STOOL HELEN HAD BEEN SITTING ON.  SHE SIGHS AND A LOOK OF BRIEF PAIN CROSSES HER FACE

    MYRA APPEARING BEHIND AMAZONIA GIRLS PLACES HER HANDS ON AMAZONIA’S SHOULDERS PLEASE QUIET DOWN WE DON’T KNOW WHO COULD BE IN THIS STORE.  YOU CAN FIGHT OVER THIS WHEN WE GET HOME BUT NOT HERE. WAITS A MINUTE AM I UNDERSTOOD.